Swing

You know, having a lot of detail can be a good thing, but like all things in excess, it can be hurt the overall result. 
Your art work suffers a lot from this, not a lot, but still there. 
I also see no focal point, am I suppose to look at the girl, the hand, the hills, or the castle? They are all drawn so similarly that I don't know where to look.

So overall its a nice looking artwork with a bad sense of direction.